Question

最近，你班同學(xué)就“父母是不是最好的老師”這一話題展開(kāi)了討論。有些人認(rèn)為父母是最好的老師，有些人認(rèn)為也不盡然。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，寫一篇短文介紹討論結(jié)果以及你的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。

觀點(diǎn) 原因	同意	不完全同意
1	教會(huì)如何生活	過(guò)分溺愛(ài)
2	指出缺點(diǎn)，指明方向	強(qiáng)加興趣、價(jià)值觀
3	教會(huì)富有愛(ài)心	希望值過(guò)高

Answer 1

 Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives. They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life. What’s more, parents’ love helps to teach them how to love others. So parents are their most important teachers.

  However, not all of us hold the same views. Some think that their parents give them too much love, and they are too eager to pass on their values and interests to them. Moreover, their parents sometimes expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach.

  In my opinion, parents are our important teachers. But parents should also try to understand their children more and limit the generation gap. 

解析:

這篇文章要點(diǎn)表達(dá)要完整而準(zhǔn)確，清楚展示主題。可以先提出文章的主題，進(jìn)而列出贊成的觀點(diǎn)及其相關(guān)的理由，同時(shí)在其后可以給出反面的觀點(diǎn)，論據(jù)要十分充足。文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，前后要連貫。