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請(qǐng)看下面兩幅圖，你有什么感想？請(qǐng)就此寫(xiě)一段話，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:

· 這幅圖說(shuō)明了一個(gè)什么現(xiàn)象？對(duì)此你是怎么看的？

· 簡(jiǎn)述父母對(duì)你的意義。

· 我們?cè)摓楦改缸鲂┦裁矗?/p>

· 也可寫(xiě)你其他的一些觀點(diǎn)。

注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于80；

（2）在答題卷上作答。

 

                                                                                

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                               

 

Answer 1

【答案】

As is vividly depicts in the cartoon, the old man is sitting on the coach with disappointment and sadness, because no one comes back to celebrate with them. Although they received a lot of presents from their children, they feel very miserable.

Nowadays, young men look so busy and independent that they move out and mind their own business every day. On usual days, they would not like to take their time to visit their parents with the excuses of busyness. On some festival days, they probably share a little time to drop in their parents or even just send some presents but don’t show up personally.

Recently, a new law came into effect, which urges young people to visit their parents frequently . However busy we may be, we should spend more time talking with them and accompanying them, because they once gave us so much selfless love that we should return them the same from the bottom of our heart.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇漫畫(huà)作文，談?wù)摰氖切⒕锤改负徒�期出臺(tái)的探望父母的法律的話題�？磮D作文要求考生將畫(huà)面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫(huà)用文字表達(dá)出來(lái)，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫(huà)中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。考生首先要對(duì)圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫(huà)的信息進(jìn)行說(shuō)明或議論。此時(shí)考生一定要注意把握?qǐng)D畫(huà)的中心思想，寫(xiě)出圖畫(huà)要反映的內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】As is vividly depicts in the cartoon, the old man is sitting on the coach with disappointment and sadness, because no one comes back to celebrate with them.這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和原因狀語(yǔ)從句，Although they received a lot of presents from their children, they feel very miserable.這句話用的是讓步狀語(yǔ)從句， Nowadays, young men look so busy and independent that they move out and mind their own business every day. 這句話是用了so…that…句型， Recently, a new law came into effect, which urges young people to visit their parents frequently 這也是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，However busy we may be, we should spend more time talking with them and accompanying them這句話用了however引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。

考點(diǎn)：考查漫畫(huà)作文