Question

記敘文(圖畫故事)

時態(tài)：一般過去時，過去進(jìn)行時

人稱：第二人稱

語法：轉(zhuǎn)折、并列

下面有四副圖，假設(shè)女孩叫Mary,男孩叫Peter, 請根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容，寫一篇短文。

[寫作內(nèi)容]

根據(jù)以上四幅畫，寫一篇短文，短文包括如下內(nèi)容：

1．Peter路過水龍頭旁，不關(guān)水；

2．Mary關(guān)水龍頭，Peter斜眼看；

3．Mary憤怒責(zé)備Peter，Peter繼續(xù)走他的路；

4．Peter不以為然，Mary詫異。

[寫作要求]

1．只能使用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容；

2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名。

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)] 　　句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。 　　Possible version： 　　One day, Peter finished his class and was walking home．When he passed by a tap flowing water, he pretended not to see it and went on walking．Just at this time, Mary saw it and rushed to the tap and turned it off as quickly as possible．Because Peter looked at her in surprise after seeing Mary having the tap turned off, she scolded Peter about why he didn’t turn off the tap when he passed by．However, Peter said that it was not his business because it was not he who turned it on, which made very angry and very disappointed．