Question

假設(shè)你在參加“保護(hù)地球”英文征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)以“Save the Earth！”為題寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：

現(xiàn)狀	1. 地球變臟、變暖； 2. 自然災(zāi)害多發(fā)； 3. 動(dòng)植物處于危險(xiǎn)之中；
原因	1. 人口越來越多； 2. 人們一直砍伐森林、殺戮動(dòng)物；
建議	1. 不吃野生動(dòng)物； 2. 栽更多的樹木

注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右。短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不分先后，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 短文中不要出現(xiàn)具體的學(xué)校姓名和人名；
Save the earth
Our earth was healthy and beautiful in the past. However,                                              
                                                                             

Answer 1

Save the earth
Our earth was healthy and beautiful in the past. However, now it’s getting dirtier and warmer. Natural disasters happen more often than before. Animals and plants are in danger.
Why does all this happen? First, there are more and more people on the earth. Second, people keep cutting down forests and killing animals.
What can we do to help the earth? I think everybody can do something to help save the earth. For example, we shouldn’t eat wild animals. We should plant more trees. Also, we should encourage people around us to do the same. I hope our earth will become more and more beautiful.

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，所以在寫作時(shí)，要尤其注意一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)提示，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語, keep cutting， save the earth，F(xiàn)or example encourage people around us to do，I hope…寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)運(yùn)用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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